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Dear organizer:
I’m cheerful about the news of going hiking. The wonderful hiking, ‘Discover Shanghai’, covers a round trip from People’s Square to The Bund. Personally speaking, I have some concerns and suggestions.
Safety and features are two aspects I’m concerned about. For on thing, on Labour Day, the business streets will be so crowded that people can’t even stretch themselves. For another, the trip can’t represent the combination of tradition and modernity if it only covers merchandise streets.
I strongly propose that we consider the two factors. When it comes to safety, students can be divided into groups with group leaders, therefore, leaders can contact teachers constantly and pay attention to members. Besides, we can design a one-way trip, the route of which involves some alleys (long tang). In this way, students can enjoy magnificent modern development, as well as historical traditional charisma of Shanghai, making the theme ‘Discover Shanghai’ more impressive.
I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause you, but I still hope that my suggestions can be taken into consideration. Despite the concerns and suggestions, I’m still looking forward to this joyful hiking.
Yours, xxx
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